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Level 2 It is my second try. I failed with my first one as I unintentionaly broke too many rules 
This time I added more details to create a story around the chosen model
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thanks for using my stock
You have a nice grouping of characters on the right hand side of your picture plane, then have a very large left hand side with nothing in it but trees. A better composition would be to crop the left side off and make the devitation more diagonal than horizonal. Remember, the required stock is always the central part of a challenge entry and really shoud be the largest thing in the image. That's what we did for our "New Lands" challenge. I don't think you were a member when we started that one. Take a look in our gallery and you'll see what I'm speaking about.
And look at this one of mine, how I brought the characters up front where they are more important than the background is, and large so that you can see detail.
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Another link that can help you understand what I mean are these two tutorials that I wrote for the group:
Space and depth:
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The Elements And Principles of Design:
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I'm happy that you gave it another try, because this one is better.